A couple of pieces of feedback from my tutor on assignment 3 has led me to look at some rework on the assignment. I have not resubmitted assignment 3 however I may consider for final submission to OCA.
- The series wrks better as photobook and in monochrome. I was very close to submitting in monochrome as I do believe there is greater consistency and in some cases more powerful images.
- Images 3 & 4 are the weakest and would improve from a wider framing. I think I agree with this and fortunately I had some leeway on the original photographs allowing the creation of a wider frame.
The reworked series in photobook form:-
The reworked images :-
DKL_OCA_ExpressingYourVision_LearningLog 