The Brief
Revisit one of the exercises on daylight, artificial light or controlled light from Part Four (Ex 4.1, Ex 4.2 or Ex 4.3) and develop it into a formal assignment submission. The submission requirement for this assignment is a set of between six and ten high-quality photographic prints.There are many ways to edit and the most valuable one is probably to show your work to friends, family and your OCA peers for feedback – you are guaranteed to discover something new in your work. Another tip is to pin the work up on the wall and live with a for a few days. ‘A Quick Guide to Editing Your Photo Series using Stickies’ on the IPO (Invisible Photographer Asia) website, but bear in mind that this is not a narrative assignment – you’re not required to produce a story.
EDITING 101 – A Quick Guide to Editing Your Photo Series using Stickies
Assessment of photography in any context is an assessment of images and accompanying words so please Include a written analysis of your work outlining:
how you have developed the assignment from the original exercise in Part 4
which practitioners you’ve looked at for inspiration and how their work has influenced you
your technical approach and any particular techniques you incorporated
the strengths and weaknesses of particular photographs and your project as a whole (self-
assessment)
Conclude your notes with a personal reflection on how you’ve developed the exercise in order to meet the descriptors of the Creativity criteria. Write 500–1,000 words.
Background
Layered, complex and mysterious…
This is a reworking of assignment 4 after feedback from my tutor confirmed a suspected problem I had with the original submission and how it addressed the brief. In short the original submission was orthogonal to the brief at best. Shame, I really enjoyed creating the series, but in truth I was quite aware of the issue from the outset. Rather than identify a single element of light to concentrate on I attempted to investigate further on a wide spectrum of the complexity of light. In this reworking I focus in on artificial light and how this can be used to create atmospheric photographs.
Whilst going through the assignments and exercises in EYV I am learning many things about photography of course but also many things about myself. For instance I am finding out about my approach to the assignments; the inspirations and ideas for my assignments tend to come in an iterative and chaotic process of, part considered thought and part emergent ideas from the photographs I am taking. Considering my work during write up then is in part stratification and clarification of this cyclic process. There are in truth many thoughts and ideas I have during this process, some of which survive and galvanise into the rationale for the assignments, some die early and others linger in the background supporting the assignments but never having the strength to be promoted to inclusion in my write ups. For this re-work I have not taken any new shots. I have revisited the contact sheet and more importantly reconsidered the process I went through, the inspiration I used and the ideas i had along the way. Searching through this I could have chosen any of the aspects investigated in part 4 since all were fascinating to me ( hence my desire to stay broad and cover all aspects ) I have though chosen to concentrate on artificial light and how this can bring interest, drama and ambiguity to an image.
Four influences were strongest here –
Although not apparent in many of the photographs in this submission, the work of Brassai and his shots of Paris had a big influence throughout. In particular I picked up on Brassai’s use of light to help bring forth a narrative – see entry Brassai’s use of light to strengthen composition from my learning log
Sato Shintaro work in neon street scenes in the blue hour I found very busy and exciting much like the city he photographs. I have been lucky enough to visit Tokyo and feel the energy from these images. This is in no small way powered by the copious neon light. This series has some similarities in that many of the shots are street scenes illuminated by artificial light, Helsinki however is much more relaxed and laid back than Tokyo and I hope this comes across in the series.
The work of Rut Blees’ night time images of London producing an ethereal gold wash across the city streets. The title of my series is Helsinki Gold but it was not the gold I took as inspiration it was the idea that a single colour can be pre-eminent. This was interesting to me during this series, that the colour happens to be gold was an emergent property of my investigations however.
Finally, inspiration from Lisa Barnard, The Canary and the hammer (Stein, 2019). This helped support the idea that a set of apparently disconnected images can come together successfully under a clear rationale.
Rationale
The series is a journey through the streets of Helsinki on a near midsummer midweek evening. It had actually been Finland day the day before which may explain to some extent the relative quiet of the scenes here as everyone was recovering from the previous days festivities but in truth the impression I got from the city was one of relaxation and simplicity – Helsinki is comfortable in it’s own skin. The journey begins just as the city is entering it’s blue hour and ends in darkness ( not so dark this far north in the middle of June ). As The light of the day recedes the influence of the street lights take on an ever increasing impact on the images created and the series at it’s heart aims to reflect this simple suggestion. I often feel there is an ambiguity in streets under artificial light. Everything seems more close more here and right now but at the same time there is an undercurrent of the world being not quite what it seems, ambiguous. Sometimes exciting and sometimes even dangerous but always more interesting. The impression of the shopfront (4) and the club window (7) during day time are tame and bland compared to these same scenes under dark and bathed in artificial illumination. The images of light on the street (1) and reflected lights on the building opposite (2) again suggest a world enhanced and more complex which is not apparent during the reality of daylight. Spaces (3) and faces (5) are also rendered with more intrigue and drama than their straightforward daylight equivalents. In the rooms of our evenings, light adds atmosphere and a touch of other world to our environments (6)
Technical
The series was shot entirely in manual mode which I am finding much more satisfying than my default which is to shoot in Aperture priority. I typically use histogram to select the correct exposure and find that this methods frees me up to select the correct exposure for the subject with ease.
As the light was fading and exposure time was increasing I increased ISO but only a little, i used a small tripod where necessary but a few shots of around 1/6s were taken handheld leaning against a post to aid stability.
Strengths and weaknesses
I think the series as a whole works as a response to the brief with focus on artificial light and and also as a representation of the ideas I had in mind whilst creating it. However none of the images I think are particularly strong or stand up particularly well on their own.
The strongest individual image in my view is (1) lights on street, strong lines and composition and a clear introduction to the series.
Image (3) Stockman is the image I would like to have been better than it turned out, focus is a bit soft ( handheld ), I don’t think this detracts from the image per-se but it is not what I intended for this. I also think it works better in a low contrast monochrome but that of course would not fit with the series. I did consider the series in monochrome, this can be seen in the sequencing shot, rejected as the clarity of single colour is lost.
Given time I would progress the series across all composition types in the series; street, shop/club fronts, people, reflected light, lights themselves. As the series expands across all elements the central theme of Helsinki in Gold would be strengthened. This could also be taken out of Helsinki, Edinburgh for me feels more silver than gold which is a project worth pursuing as a counterpoint to Helsinki Gold.
Creativity
I believe there is evidence of invention and creativity to bring together a coherent series of images under a single clear rationale (gold), from an apparently disconnected set. Imagination & invention also in some of the images, notably the lights super-imposed on reflection of building (2) and the slightly abstract lights on wall (6)
Presentation
Considering sequence and presentation for the series. This series would be best presented as a sequence of individual framed images in perhaps a gallery setting. The sequence is chosen as a progression in throught the evening as the artificial light becomes more pronounced and gold becomes increasingly the subject of the the images.
For the process of sequencing I printed all shortlisted images and used a wall board to position the images until I had settled on my favoured sequence.

Photoshop was used to create a vision of the art gallery setting with each image framed and hung in the intended sequence.


The series
Helsinki Gold
1
ƒ/5.0 47.0 mm SS1/20 ISO200

2
ƒ/4.5 49.0 mm SS1/60 ISO200

3
ƒ/9.0 70.0 mm SS1/6 ISO200

4
ƒ/4.5 50.0 mm SS1/40 ISO400

5
ƒ/5.6 70.0 mm SS1/10 ISO400

6
ƒ/3.5 31.0 mm SS1/10 ISO400

7
ƒ/4.5 50.0 mm SS1/5 ISO400
